A Human Experience ( The Unforgiving RP )

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A Human Experience ( The Unforgiving RP )

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The world as we know it has come to an end.

The fires of war has consumed and ravaged our world, leaving few of humanity to rebuild.

Great plagues slithered and poisoned our nations.

Radiation has rendered what used to be excellent farming land into useless waste.

Nations reduced to communes. Communes reduced to families.

Humanity was doomed.

Or... So it seemed. We know humans, they are an adaptive race, a strong species. Rather difficult to kill if you will.

Generations have passed, and in Central America a new city has become a hub for people all around the world. The city has been Christened many things, "Hellhole Number 3", "New New York", "Strife City" but it has no real name. Within the City, as we will call it, are a number of situations, the buildings are generally intact, which cause skyscrapers to become towns in their own rights. One man has risen to the top of the top of the Sky Clans, who have taken up residence in the five biggest skyscrapers. These clans vary in their cultures and societies, but none are isolated from the other clans. A network of bridges and walkways connect the skyscrapers. This man who's risen to the top was many things, he's been a slaver a gladiator a trader but now he's at the top. They say he's a man not to trifle with, that he can hold his own in a fight and he'll toss you from the tallest skyscraper in all of the City. The bones that rest around that monolith seem to attest to it. He runs the gang called the Crowns, and they look for suits and ties and are the cleanest and most refined of the Five Clans. Secondly is the Dustmen, Westerners who have gathered in a large Asian designed hotel and are the primary weapon suppliers. They wear similar clothing to the mysterious clans of the Western Desert. Thirdly is the Scrappers, a large scavenging company that deals out metal for armor plating and defense. They can break down and repair a car in seconds flat. The Bordello, which is exactly what you think it is you perverts. Finally the Embassy, which isn't really a clan building but a communal building used by all the South to try and make peace or trade businesses with any of the clan members, it's not going well.

Surrounding this sprawling behemoth of a city lie four general areas which are blocked off by the West and East coasts, which are just called Hell, because the Coasts were the first thing to get bombed to hell and back.

There is the North, which consists of a thick swamp that hides the foot of a large mountain chain. Few people ever enter these swamps, and fewer still have climbed these mountains. They speak of strange creatures that have human like characteristics, that even speak English! The Bog had erupted due to immense levels of radiation and biological agents. Due to the sinking and climate change, a mountain chain had sprung up behind it, taking with it chunks of city and whatever once sat there.

To the West is an alien land, a wide, dune infested desert. One can see remnants of the Old World jutting from beneath their sandy tombs, old armored behemoths that have treads and long barrels, silver birds rusting in the harsh sun, trenches and abandoned forts. But all know of the silent tribes of dark skinned people who wield powerful weapons of the Old World. Some speak of battles between these sandy people and the automatons of a bygone time.

To the East is a forbidden forest, mutated into a combination of tall powerful pines and low hanging and strangling rain forest trees. People gossip of mystical powers hidden in the forest, of beautiful, marble buildings with see through walls, a place where fucking magnets seems possible and the healing of injuries a reality. The problem is that feral humans own these lands, painted and wielding spears and axes, ready to defend their lands and combat the ferocious fauna that has arisen to defend these Old World Temples.

To the South lies structure, a breeding ground for the old governments. A president rules it, and this is where many people stake their claim in life, to work hard and be safe from the harshness of a ruined world. However, many people have been discussing the removal of the President, rebellious factions vying for their own ideas fought off by the loyal soldiers of the Structured Remnants

Whoever you are, where ever you roam, this is your land, your beginning.

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Didnt we already have this thread?
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Bacon wrote:Didnt we already have this thread?
Crush Bandicoot's first thread was merely to drum up interest; if no one was interested, he was going to let it die. This is the actual RP thread itself.

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Okay, that makes sense. I was super confused for a moment.
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so, with permission, I'm joining in.
Jack Vivendi, aged twenty-something (four) but he doesn't really know anymore.
He carries around a frying pan, a portable camping stove, and a backpack. He likes cooking, and is pretty good at anything pertaining to finding food, such as finding food stores left over from before the apocalypse, or finding what few berries still grow in cleaner parts of The City.
Jack makes his home in one of the smaller buldings near what was once a large park, but is pretty good at climbing higher ones if he needs to, as well as staying on small ledges for prolonged periods of time.

He kind of tends to overestimate how useful other people can be, and grossly underestimates his own helpfulness.
He also feels that, in some past life, he was destined to save the world and never die or something. This leads him to make stupid mistakes, and he has been caught up in wars between the clans numerous times for this. By now, most clans recognize him so well that they just shoo him off their land.

He lives alone. He had a cat, but it died falling off a ledge.
Most everything somehow connected to Jack winds up with horrible luck.
Since this is garbled English, please refer to the brutal attack of confusion.

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Brandon stood in the center of a field, somewhere in the South. He wasn't sure if that was really smart. On one hand, it made him seem like less of a threat to those who might be a bit too paranoid, thus perhaps stopping them from taking a few shots in his direction. On the other hand, it left him completely open to anyone who didn't really give much of a shit whether or not the guy they were shooting at was a threat.

He sighed and lowered his hat. He was probably just being paranoid. After all, it wasn't as if he had any real enemies. None that weren't dead, anyway. He made sure he stayed on everyone's good side (that is, until he found them more valuable dead. But even then he made sure they were unsuspecting when the bullet was delivered). He wanted everyone he knew to be sorted into two categories: friendly and dead. When someone wasn't in either of those, that's when things got dangerous.

With him he carried a small pack of supplies, as well as a revolver. He used to have more supplies, as it had been a while since he last got more. He still had enough to last him for a while, however. Tied diagonally across his head, covering his left eye (or, more specifically, where his left eye would have been), was a strip of leather, cut from an old vest. He'd lost the eye on a day where someone didn't fit into both categories. It was a situation he'd rather not have happen ever again.

Brandon decided that he'd stood around doing nothing for no apparent reason for quite long enough. He turned and set off in a direction that seem a bit better than all the other directions.

Edit: (oh hey I just realized I should probably describe how this guy looks.

About six feet tall, average weight, and uh dark hair I guess...

I think I still need to think about his appearance a bit more...)

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Yenraek Nisah, a man of Legislature and Government, looked out from the elevated wood-platform, seeing the vast Desert to the west, brilliantly shown by the setting sun. He was in a trance when a rifle crack snapped him out of it. "Whoa, quite the jump there, doze off or somethin' Yenraek?" His friend Braxton, a mechanical engineer, loaded another round into his rifle chamber after shooting a can off of a nearby boulder. Yenraek gave a fake laugh and said "Nah, I was just thinking about stuff." His cousin Dennis opened up a pale ale from their portable cooler and asked "What kinda stuff? Weird 'revolutionist' shit?" Yenraek raised his eyebrow at Dennis and said "Well, it'd be nice if this freaking city would expand so there would be more room for refugees and Industrial growth!" Dennis took a swig and said "Dude, why do you even care about that stuff. Half of this city is in a bit of a shit-hole anyway. Just stick with your politics and enjoy life! Expansion's outta the question anyway, seeing as how Hell borders everything."

Braxton looked to the two behind him and said, "I personally wouldn't mind getting out of Structure. Stuff's going to go down badly Yenraek." Yenraek gave a questioning face and asked "Wait, what do you mean?" "The factions man, they hate your President. I heard some riots gonna happen to throw down the whole Coalition. I'd get out of town Yenraek, find some abandoned house that's not radiated and lay low." Yenraek rubbed his eyes and shrugged. "Well, maybe something will change in the President, who knows. Anyway, it's getting dark. Let's get back to the city." Dennis and Braxton packed up the gear while Yenraek looked out the desert and thought

Maybe there's something out there. Something that might change things.
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Jack was not particularly pleased with the 'food stores' he had just found. They were empty and had obviously not been full for quite a long time.
It was time to fall in line with a clan, the only remaining source of food in the City. Rumor had it one of them had found a green house and were using it to grow real fruit, but the rumors never mentioned which clan it was. So Jack was left either to root out his own food in the urban wasteland or swear his allegiance to a group that had previously attempted to kill him numerous times.

"Guess I won't be deciding now..." Jack mumbled to himself as he pushed the door closed behind him, blinking against the harsh sunlight outside the warehouse.
He checked a crude map of the city he had made, with a few red dots on it. All but two were crossed out. Taking a red marker from his belt, Jack crossed off another. One dot remained, right at the edge of the city. Rumors of mutated monsters around the edges of the city kept most clansmen away, so food stores in the outer few blocks would surely remain full.
Jack set off towards the warehouse by the desert.
Since this is garbled English, please refer to the brutal attack of confusion.

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Joseph hefted the slightly rotten baseball bat over one slim shoulder. He and three of his fellows had spotted somebody walking along a street all by his lonesome; one of the cardinal sins in the uncaring City. Probably some shit-for-brains from the South who thought he was tough. They came through every once in a while. Got by on their strength, taking whatever they wanted from smaller people who didn't have the brains to stick together. Thought since they could do that, they could take a stroll through the City.

They never made that mistake again.

Joseph had lived in the City all his life. His mother had been a prostitute who hadn't lived to see him hit 14, and his father was probably one of her many clients. The gang he had joined was the closest thing he had to a family, and he acted accordingly, extolling the virtues of watching each other's backs and putting each other first. It was all bullshit. Joseph wouldn't have spent one more second among those lazy, psychopathic fuckers if he hadn't known that he wouldn't last a second along on the streets. So he acted. They seemed to enjoy the gestures. A few of them actually seemed to believe them. All the better; a few more bodies between himself and the mortal coil.

He was on the average side of things, if a little slender. Nothing you wouldn't see among every other gang you could think of. Mid-twenties. Long, dirty and unkempt brown hair. A patchwork of borderline filthy clothing, drawn from wherever he could find it. The only thing that really set him apart was the perpetual frown that had taken residence on his face. It wasn't exactly a unique expression, except that it never left. Most people smiled at least when they found something nice, or were high on whatever drugs they could find, but not Joseph. He was all too aware that his time was limited and he wouldn't be caught dead putting that shit in his body.

The signal was given. Joseph and his comrades rushed out from behind their hiding place and set upon the unlucky fool. Joseph thought he might have heard the crack of a kneecap as he swung his weapon. It ended as suddenly as it had begun, with the Southerner broken and bloody on the ground. He might have been breathing, but no one really cared. The loot was pretty good; a bit of food and water, some clothes, etc. Best part was the shitty pistol he had been carrying. Joseph managed to rock-paper-scissors it away from the others as they split their winnings. It would have just been wasted on them anyway.

He sighed and looked up at the mighty Skyscrapes in the distance as the rest continued to squabble over the scraps the man still possessed.

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Karok was standing at the top of the trees like he always did since the time he was still a little kid. Back then it was just a game, as much fun as you can have if you live in this kind of world.
But now that he is no kid anymore it is not a game.

What does he do? He hunts. Wolves most of the time.
Their fur keeps the people of his tribe warm and their meat can feed a whole family. If they are in a pack it would be too difficult to beat them,
but once separated they are easy prey for him and the other warriors. Everything that sets foot in their territory is.

His eyes glance over the shining facades of the ruins of a dead city, telling stories of a time long gone, stories no one alive understands.
All they know is that it's their holy duty to protect them, no matter the costs.

Suddenly, a noise snaps him out of his thoughts. Intruders. They are from an other tribe it seems. Karok calls for Shalo, his falcon. It's the sign for the others.
Everything here is his prey. No exceptions.
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The Westerner slid his cold black eyes across the jungle forestry. His body hunched up, arms steadying themselves on the complex looking rifle in his hands. A red cylinder ran alongside the thin but tall black rectangle that was pressed up on a military shoulder stock. It hissed a little as he swept it through the jungle, searching, seeking.

Behind him were Southerners and Cities, men in regular clothes who held the Barker, the nickname for the South's manufactured rifle that held eight shots in it's metal magazine but packed enough punch to drop a hefty mutant let alone a man. They flanked a man in a suit, a fat man with a wide brimmed hat and cane. He stuck it into the soggy ground, twisting it. The Westerner, Yule'tsk halted, his brown cloth whispering against the metal that clasped his sun scorched skin. He bit his teeth, and gave off a shot, the laser weapon giving off a lightning crack and a snap of red light shot forth into the jungle. Answering it was a scream of pain and agony as a tribal warrior stumbled forth, a hole sizzling where his heart used to be.

The fat man chuckled. "These tribals, why can't they see that it's time for sivilization to return mm?". He clasped his meaty hand on the shoulder of a mercenary. The merc gave a half hearted smile. The fat man chuckled again. Jungle shifted and cracked beneath their feet as the party moved ever inward towards the ancient city. The soldiers eyed the surroundings nervously, but the Easterner refused to shake, it held it's ground with affirmation of it's rank. It's body moved ever forward, metal greaves stomping onto the grass. He stopped in front of a whitewashed building, trees exploding from it and vines slithering across the walls. Glass windows lay in a million little scattered pieces and the thick canopy finally let in some light. The Westerner shuddered, this was a palace of the Old World, and they held these places in high reverence. The fat man hobbled next to it. "Good good work you.. whatever you are." He turned his chubby face back at the soldiers, "Well, get in there!" They hurried in, the Easterner raised a mangled hand in protest but the fat man whipped his cane to the Easterner's chest. "No boy, you stay wid me."

Inside, the soldiers swept room by room, finding old desks and chairs and shattered computers and trees and grass and slithering tiny creatures. Bugs whizzed by, innocent in their passage. One of the men, a City dweller who was a member of the Scaving clans, poked at a metal case. "Hey guys, come look at this," and nudged it with his rifle. The case popped open, revealing nothing inside. The mercs shook their head, mutterings of "wild goose chase" and "rich dumbass" were thrown about. Finally they entered a lab room, with a glass, albiet shattered now, ceiling. On the ground were a few humming silver cases, with plants resting in heat lamps. The Scavie seemed cautious, "That's not right, the hell's the power coming from?". A Southerner wiped off some dust to one of the silver cases, "Projec..t.. Nu-" He stopped, a green hand wrapped around his throat.

The rich man's brow grew thunderous when the screams reached his ears. The Westerner made a hasty motion with his hands, sort of like a cross. The rich, fat man spit on the ground. "Sometin's valuable in there, and dammed it all if I can't get it." The Easterner pointed back the way they came, the fat man nodded, his double chins wobbling, "And Gunderson always gets what's valuable."

The screams echoed into the forest.

Animals cowered.
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A trail of footprints in dry sand creates a jagged line across the vast expanse of the Western Desert. The line is soon erased by the very thing that guides it; the ever-blowing winds of the West.

At the helm of the ever lengthening line is a man without a reason. There are equally jagged lines spreading across his own body, but no wind can erase these. They are the telltale signs of the disease called Crags; his right forearm and right leg have already been claimed, his mouth is on the way. Within a few short years his head will be entirely paralyzed and he will die. For most, an onset of such a disease would be a cue; to conclude their life, to accomplish some great goal.

Kar Demki is not most. He was born without a goal and he intends to die without one as well. He walks the way the Wind blows him, and gathers only what it leads him too. A pistol is slung about his hip, ready to be brought to bear against the scum of the desert. A thin cloak goes about his legs for modesty's sake alone. Beyond that, he is bare; the flesh-drying Crags robbed him of a need for clothing some time ago.

The wind changes direction, and Kar Demki follows. His new direction takes him towards a ruin; one of many which dot the Desert's surface.

What lies within, Kar Demki does not know. The wind knows; Kar Demki learns.

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((Mander, I believe you mean Western Desert, East is a jungle.))

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A clock ticked quietly in the old wooden room. Sunlight stabbed in through the shutters, sending golden beams into the thin screen of smoke that drifted lazily throughout the study. The source was a halfway finished cigar that rested between aged fingers. In the other hand of this aged man rested a glass where two ice chunks quietly facebattled and make a clatter in a yellowish liquid. The glass is lifted and the drink washes down a tired throat while the glass rests on dry lips. The aged man grimaces, but grins after setting the glass down.

The wrinkled hand shifts papers across the heavy wooden desk, aged and carved in intricate forms with gargoyles with their hideous faces watched the dark, warm study. The clock ticked quietly in the back. Lifting his face to let his eyes stare down the glasses, the wrinkled man rechecked the yellowing page. It was a report on the South's Embassy's efforts to initiate trade of any kind with the four clans in the City. It wasn't going well. The wrinkled man sighed and adjusted his tie. Opening his drawer he reached past the engraved handcannon and retrieved a cigar snipper. After cutting of the burning end the wrinkled hands put the cigar back into the breast pocket on the black suit.

The older man pushed his chair back, and stood carefully. Removing his glasses and folding them, the old man turned to the window that strained to hold back the falling sun.

A knock came from the door.

"Mr. President? Are ya there?"

President Lionsmane's gray, sleepy eyes drifted over to the big oaken doors that guarded the portal to the outside world. Lionsmane cleared his throat, "Yes yes Gunderson what do you want." His voice was careful, but had the restraint of one capable of stirring crowds.

A fat head peeked from around the big doors. "Ya don't mind if my deah, deah bodyguard comes in do ya?" Gunderson smirked.

Lionsmane waved his hand nonchalantly. "Good! Come in boy." Gunderson edged his way in, his gray suit bulging at the waistline, his wide brimmed farmer's hat bobbing atop that earnest face. Fat fingers clutched the black cane with the silver eagle head as Gunderson attempted to make a show. "Let me introduce Yuleshk! At least'n that's what I've been callin 'em." The Western soldier entered, laser rifle cradled in arms. He quietly stood behind Gunderson, tall and thin, metal armor dust and clothe covered.

"We have things to discuss Lion, I need more men for..."

Their talking faded as the heavy oak door closed with a thud.

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A gangly lad walked through the City. It was just about noon, and the heat was absolutely terrible. The few animals that lived in the sprawling City had all flown or crawled or bounded away to shadier spots, and the people as well.
Most of them.

Over to the side was a gang of men, all dressed in tattered apparel. One of them happened to notice the young man, in his raggedy duster, making his way to no particular location. He gestured to the other ones of his group, about six men. The gang advanced behind the wayward traveler.

A man advanced from the group to intercept the loner. He was better dressed than the others, to some extent, and walked like this was his place, and everyone else was only there through invitation. Putting on his best grin, he swung himself in front of the traveler.

"'Ey, son, whatcha doin'?" inquired the leader.

"I, um, just looking for the... the Scavengers..." mumbled the young man. His head seemed to retract even further into the collar of his duster with every word.

"Woss your name, yeah?" prodded the other man, with his wheezy voice.

"P-Patrick. Why?" Patrick couldn't stop playing with his hands, he was getting terribly nervous.

"Jus' curious, jus' curious is all. Can' make a friend in these places if you don' know they's name," the man gestured at the City, spreading his arms out like he was making rainbows. "Where you from, boy?"

"Uh, the South... Do you, um, know where the Scavengers are?" Patrick would remind a bystander of a very large tortoise walking on two legs, except sometimes it shook like a scarecrow in the wind.

"Sure, son! On'y you've been going in the wrong d'rection this whole time! Look, see, if you keep goin' in this d'rection, you'd never make it, not if you walk the whole world!" He laughed with his scratchy voice. By now, the rest of the gang had surrounded the two men.

The gang leader stopped, and Patrick instinctively stopped as well. He shouldn't have done that, now that he realized.

The gang members suddenly looked very intimidating. They were everywhere, almost pressing in on him. The air seemed to stagnate, and Patrick began to feel like he'd been squeezed into a box far too small for him.

"I... um... uh..." He was beginning to panic, and unable to form coherent words. The men were pushing in on him like he was some wild prey. Now his thoughts were babbling too... The tremors started to get faster, the ones that made him shake and jitter and twitch and and and

Patrick couldn't remember much of what had happened next, only that everything became blurry and he pushed someone over, or maybe it was two people, and then he was running through the City with his long legs and his coat was flying behind him and also his hat fell off but that was alright because it was on his neck now but it didn't matter because
because because because
the men behind him the men were shouting to get him or or or something like that
only
only now he realized
he hadn't gotten the man's name
the one who was shouting
at everyone else
and everyone else
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