AWKWARD ZOMBIE

I've been thinking about selling my art on t-shirts. People I know always complement me on my doodle-like drawings, and I thought they would be good on shirts. I really want to get a laptop then I can get a tablet and photoshop. Our family computer goes slow and can't handle anything else being down...

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r61/airesox/Lucky-Sketch.png Lucky what are you doing you're supposed to go the other way Point out any errors if you like the only problem I have is that the hands and feet look a wee bit too small. But besides that, verrrrrrrry adorable unless....this is suppose...

Zang wrote:ooooh i love it :'D

am i doing it rite yet guys?

EDIT: awesome art page-get WOO HOO

Airigh wrote:

Her face was cuter as a sketch. >:

That's adorable! :awesome:

Decker wrote:And then I want you to go back and take BLACK, and then start using ONE LINE per stroke and I want you to go over that shit.

Xabyrn wrote:The scribbly lines bother me.

Nalani wrote:make a solid outline in black NOT making rapid sketch marks back and forth, but keeping the lines clear and clean. It looks a lot better.

Zang wrote: my favorite part is how he goes out of his way to ridicule me

my favorite part is how you don't listen to what we're all trying to tell you

Your challenge is to write crossover fanfiction combining Sonic the Hedgehog and Super Mario Bros.. The story should use magic as a plot device!

just watch some youtube poop

Xabyrn wrote:Yeah, that's a repost. :I

my bad. I'm a little flustered from little "problem" we had earlier. Also, I'm not good at remembering.

well anyways, now for some serious art.

yeaaah it was about 3 in the morning.

Well played, Nalani, well played.

Coriserai wrote: Well, the 'Derp' in the corner of the picture really draws attention from the person in the center, who is supposed to be the focus point.

well I'm gonna write "derp" in every picture I draw anyways, but I APPRECIATE YOUR CRITIQUE.

criteek plz
wut am I doing wrong (not like i care or anythin)

Zang.