AWKWARD ZOMBIE

Malum wrote:PORTALS? BLACK BEINGS, OBLIVION RIPOFF.

no just kidding.
That sounds a lot better. I mean it just sound like a better storywise.

i read the first part and i was like "NUU I NEVER PLAYED OBLIVION BEFORE!"

and then i'm like "whew"

well crud.... guess i'll have to completely toss every idea i ever had ever about hearts ah well, i'd rather have someone tell me that my storyline is terrible then that it's a ripoff- Story pitch #2 ....no thats a ripoff of twilight princess...... story pitch #3 okay... Zang and his friends go look...

i do plan to expand on it, trust me, by the time i get all the characters and such worked out, it'll sound much more original

it's hard to do that without giving out spoilers

Merlin that's really good

I didn't know you could draw

this isn't really a story, more of a story pitch (the idea for a story) Zang and his two best friends grow up in a forested town orphans, they were always told to stay out of the east side of the forest, and grew up on stories of magic and of the Mana Tree that is said to be located in their forest,...

i lost

Shoolis wrote:Could it look like the guy who took the punch actually took the punch?
Just make it look like he's recoiling in pain and that could be a good drawing.

he's falling backwards and bleeding

how else can i make it look like he took the punch

double post, oops
and before Zang got his heart weapon-

i was going for pure evil but pen ink could work too in this case XD

oh i tried using a pose this time-

lol it wasnt supposed to look good

like that?

and i drew this-

GAH- i cant get the comic started, i dont know whats wrong with me! i open in up, start drawing....no...erase it ...try again....wrong...erase...try....GAAAAH-exit the picture out and rub my temples i can draw normally fine- but for some odd reason, when i try to put something into comic form it maj...

...i cant either