AWKWARD ZOMBIE

Good God, the first panel took forever to draw.



Oh, Nik. There you go making up things that you think sound cool to impress the ladies. You know full well that you're not doing heavy industrial work. And so does she.
You haven't even noticed yet that you've got grease and soot on your face, and your hair's all tweaked out from where you twist it with your engine grease-covered hands on the right. You look silly.

You have a really good feel for panelling Riku.
I also like the hand thump in the second last panel.

So I did some landscape practice. Pretty much copied from a ref pic.

Ooohhhhh that is gorgeous, Dire.
And thanks. It took loooooots of practice.



Herp, Mystery lady revealed.
Yay, welding soot. Aaaaand that tall guy in the back is being an asshole, waiting for the shit to hit the fan.



Also, I just realized that I forgot to draw Kane's injuries on the previous page. Whoops.

Nice reveal! Also her pose in the last panel looks great.

I've been paid to draw this. Is it as good as I think it is?

The hands look a bit too small for me, his left arm is too long, and his right arm appears too short. And I cannot tell what you wanted to do with the legs? I got an idea, but... if it is what I think, then you mixed up the positions. His left leg would need to be the stretched one, and the foot also touching the floor, while his right leg should be angled. Like this, his left ankle also appears broken because it points inwards. The shading on the fur is way, way messy. Decide on one style, either with blur or with cel-shading, and not mixed both, it looks pretty bad. Also, I don't know if it was intentional? But on the dark sides sometimes there are lighter borders - you should correct that too, not only does it look even worse than the fur, but it actually makes it appear like you worked really unclean. The shirt looks good, or is this rather a jumpsuit? I think you should go over the leg parts again, it's a bit hard to tell what's going on down there, it looks like his legs melted together.







A picture I did for dorbelle's birthday. Yes I know her birthday was ages ago, but long story short I drew something for her and unfortunately I have no real way of contacting her. Hopefully she'll see it eventually.
I drew her some alien creature thing, because I know she likes eerie things. Did this in a sort of speedpainting during the soccer match yesterday.

Ooooooh, I love how alien it looks. That is awesome, Tatzel. And the color of the light effects against the rest of the colors contrast beautifully.



Also, VK, I'm not going to lie, and I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings too much, but compared to everything else you draw, that soccer uniform looks kind of like you traced it. It doesn't match your style anywhere else. I'd recommend altering either it, or the rest of the drawing to fit one style. Also, I don't know if you normally do, but maybe try drawing on multiple layers? That would get rid of some of those yellow-green lines and flecks that Tatzel was picking up.

Ah, thanks! I did not have a set color for the light effects, I had the teal on my palette anyways and I thought I might aswell go with it. I just have a thing for contrasting colors in general, and in this case it's pretty fitting as it makes it appear even more eerie hehe

And another page:




Silly Kane, you don't piss off the girl whose arms are almost as big as yours. (Also, he doesn't mean it quiiiiiiite like it sounds, but we'll get to that later.)

rooooooooooooood

Who? Me, Riku, or Kane?

kane >:(

Oh okay. whew. I was all OH GOD WHAT DID I DO

i did a homestuck again