AWKWARD ZOMBIE

ACTION PANEL

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

E: I should really read this from the beginning, I'm starting to want to know the daisies story behind all this.

G'daisies, I'm taking up like a third of the page now.

Also, several people have asked for the beginning of the comic: http://rikukyuutu.tumblr.com/page/104
Terrible first cover and chapter all the way to current. Click on the images to get full sized.

AAAAAAAAAND ANOTHER


Owwwwwww burned mouth

I love how quickly you pump these out.

Yo Riku about this one

In the last panel the guy on the left's pose seems weird to me. He's supposed to be running to them right? But it seems like he's more about to drop to the floor or something

I like the last frame in the previous one, it's dynamic and cool but this one is pretty stiff. I think it would work better from a different angle, maybe with the yellow guy in the background running towards them.

Cori wrote:Practice drawing different body types for my characters, I guess. It was just a quick sketchy thing.



The guy on the left is supposed to have a bit of a turkey neck, eheheh. And he's holding the book weird (also he is blushing because he is shy and shirtless). Umm...thoughts, maybe?

i never realized cori put these up

i have nothing to say just admiring them again

Head of The Brothel wrote:

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Yo Riku about this one

In the last panel the guy on the left's pose seems weird to me. He's supposed to be running to them right? But it seems like he's more about to drop to the floor or something

I like the last frame in the previous one, it's dynamic and cool but this one is pretty stiff. I think it would work better from a different angle, maybe with the yellow guy in the background running towards them.

Ohhhh thank you. At the very least, I will put this into the notes for when I go back and redraw everything. I'm debating about whether or not I'll redraw it right now.
I was having some trouble with that panel, and it never occurred to me that it was too flat. So yeah, thanks.

END OF CHAPTER THREE
daisies, got a lot done today.

working on my comic again
not the full page here, that would be way too big in its current state (also it's pretty empty at the moment)

I like your layout.

Thanks, I'm trying something out for this page.
I love the way you portray action, Riku. And drama, ooh, drama. That's a really nice shot there in your last page.

Is it supposed to be photos? I know this is still in the sketch stage, so I'm not seeing everything that will be there, and things will still probably get erased and redrawn a thousand times, but the first guy's hand looks like it's at a bit of an odd angle, versus the position of his arm.

And thanks. Fun fact: I didn't actually decide on architecture or design the Kroatian Flag until this page.

I am having so much trouble with that hand, I left it like that for the moment so I wouldn't get frustrated and rush the other panels.
Naw, they aren't photos, I just wanted to see how it would look with a semi-dynamic rotated panel vs the normal straight panel. I guess for movement? I guess.
And yeah, I do last minute designs too. Though I have to be extra careful to not forget and mess up later.

I could make the pose with relative ease; it just looks weird for the moment.

Yeahhhh, I was going to take a break, now that I"ve finished chapter three, maybe actually do some of my classwork (by which I mean attend lecture)










Yeah, no. I didn't think it would actually happen either.
Cover for chapter 4